OMG. Too many, Author. Let Adrian have this. Evan didn't see her as worthy, Ferris definitely didn't, but Adrian didn't think he was worthy enough for her. He's the real MVP. Let him have his woman... let these 30 days be up.
I dislike Cynthia already. Immature and messy. Quite stupid too. I thought Aurora wanted to leave early, but couldn't. Why would she remain and get drinks when she could finally actually leave?
Ferris carried her from the not springs parking lot to a villa on the hot springs property, that was his personal property? But why wasn't Ashley with him the entire time? And why did it later sound like the villa they lived in before?
And this conversation negates the divorce agreement and reasoning behind it that he had her sign on their wedding night, thus destroying the entire plot of the pending divorce.
Also, how did Aurora suddenly walk out of a door that's locked from the outside?
Why was this at a hotel? Especially since she was standing at the entrance. Now she sounds like a bellhop.
OMG. Too many, Author. Let Adrian have this. Evan didn't see her as worthy, Ferris definitely didn't, but Adrian didn't think he was worthy enough for her. He's the real MVP. Let him have his woman... let these 30 days be up.
I figured he'd show up.
Where are her parents? The father that arranged the marriage to Adrian?
Help her find someone for what? It's not like there was a DJ that didn't show up.
I dislike Cynthia already. Immature and messy. Quite stupid too. I thought Aurora wanted to leave early, but couldn't. Why would she remain and get drinks when she could finally actually leave?
Ferris carried her from the not springs parking lot to a villa on the hot springs property, that was his personal property? But why wasn't Ashley with him the entire time? And why did it later sound like the villa they lived in before?
Oh, so this is a mashup of several micro novels.
And this conversation negates the divorce agreement and reasoning behind it that he had her sign on their wedding night, thus destroying the entire plot of the pending divorce.
Also, how did Aurora suddenly walk out of a door that's locked from the outside?
The audacity. This is the longest month in the history of longest months in novels...
Why does she have on lingerie? And why haven't either of them seen Ferris all dal after seeing Ashley?