This was unnecessarily long and contained multiple inconsistencies throughout. The characters we started the book with somehow disappeared. The cheating ex, the stepsister, the entire hometown pack. Raphael, the hometown perfume store owner that seemed to be a good friend.
How did erasing Marco's memory erase the memory of EVERYONE ELSE in the palace after the major competition and subsequent trial, regardless of the little blurb about the King's cover up. He can't keep people from gossiping. Vivian didn't seem ashamed or embarrassed by Lily's deceit and kept her on at the store. Knowing of Tanya's temperament but believing she ruined Lily's sense of smell.
There were so many ridiculous things happening making the story illogical. Tanya still refusing to tell Marco that Lily threatened her and forced her out then tried to have her killed after learning she was pregnant AFTER discovering that SHE was really the true fated mate making everything Lily said a lie. Too much.
But... I wanted to see how that girl from the perfume shop reacted to finding out her Lily was the impostor and that Tanya was the legitimate daughter and heir... and the guy that snapped on her for trying to scent the perfume. I hate loose ends.
I thought the Queen originally wanted to escape to sacrifice herself in the first place, so why did it take her days to do it.
Why was Cathy left alone and unguarded in a cage on rogue territory? It seemed that anyone could just walk right up in there.
Why was there no concern for Cathy's well-being and nourishment? They didn't even bother to hook up and IV to keep her hydrated, just abandoning her in the unguarded cave.
Why would he let himself be distracted that close to the time limit? Why did he need Tanya and considered her finishing her fight if he had the perfume in his pocket to begin with? Where did the rogues come from that surrounded him at the thirty minute mark if Marco had just said his soldiers had beaten them back, with them being no match for his trained soldiers?
I was wondering if he was ever going to mind link. He should have done it immediately after finding Cathy and not being able to lift her. Back up could have been well on the way. Now he's locked up, like the idiot he is.
He commands? Really? And why did Marco allow them to bicker for HOURS while his little sister was missing if he already knew he was going to attack?
Why wouldn't Marco immediately demand Cathy back instead of saying pointless stuff and fighting uselessly? Also, why does Marco suddenly accuse Eric of kidnapping his own sister when he was very adamant to Tanya that he didn't think Eric would do it so it must be Dorian.
Hmmm. I wonder if Howard is her brother... but I thought the boy twin died.
This was unnecessarily long and contained multiple inconsistencies throughout. The characters we started the book with somehow disappeared. The cheating ex, the stepsister, the entire hometown pack. Raphael, the hometown perfume store owner that seemed to be a good friend.
How did erasing Marco's memory erase the memory of EVERYONE ELSE in the palace after the major competition and subsequent trial, regardless of the little blurb about the King's cover up. He can't keep people from gossiping. Vivian didn't seem ashamed or embarrassed by Lily's deceit and kept her on at the store. Knowing of Tanya's temperament but believing she ruined Lily's sense of smell.
There were so many ridiculous things happening making the story illogical. Tanya still refusing to tell Marco that Lily threatened her and forced her out then tried to have her killed after learning she was pregnant AFTER discovering that SHE was really the true fated mate making everything Lily said a lie. Too much.
But... I wanted to see how that girl from the perfume shop reacted to finding out her Lily was the impostor and that Tanya was the legitimate daughter and heir... and the guy that snapped on her for trying to scent the perfume. I hate loose ends.
I thought the Queen originally wanted to escape to sacrifice herself in the first place, so why did it take her days to do it.
Why was Cathy left alone and unguarded in a cage on rogue territory? It seemed that anyone could just walk right up in there.
Why was there no concern for Cathy's well-being and nourishment? They didn't even bother to hook up and IV to keep her hydrated, just abandoning her in the unguarded cave.
Yep. That was the obvious solution. It's called sacrificial magic for a reason. Bye bye, Eric. Your greed caused this. Now finish it.
Why would he let himself be distracted that close to the time limit? Why did he need Tanya and considered her finishing her fight if he had the perfume in his pocket to begin with? Where did the rogues come from that surrounded him at the thirty minute mark if Marco had just said his soldiers had beaten them back, with them being no match for his trained soldiers?
I was wondering if he was ever going to mind link. He should have done it immediately after finding Cathy and not being able to lift her. Back up could have been well on the way. Now he's locked up, like the idiot he is.
Wonder where Lily was during all of this.
He commands? Really? And why did Marco allow them to bicker for HOURS while his little sister was missing if he already knew he was going to attack?
Why wouldn't Marco immediately demand Cathy back instead of saying pointless stuff and fighting uselessly? Also, why does Marco suddenly accuse Eric of kidnapping his own sister when he was very adamant to Tanya that he didn't think Eric would do it so it must be Dorian.
So glad the end is nye..
It's sad, but this is so poorly placed with everything else going on that I wasn't even interested in the s*x scene.