Could have been a great story. But names being messed up and different things being described in a totally different irrelevant word  makes it very hard to handle. Water of time to read this.

Story could have been greatl. Unfortunately names and genders was mixed up adding to an irritating reading. But the worst part was the ending. The build up was let down by the ending and some of the characters over the top personalities. Not realistic. Time wasted reading this

Fantastic story and easy to lose yourself in,  My one pet peef would be why mention special marks if the mean nothing or is of no use (like extra powers).