Honestly, it was so-so . The plot and the way it was written sometimes goes too fast or idk kinda dragged. The characters are sometimes disappointing, cant see much characters growth tho. I skipped a lot when the spelling and parapgraph mixed , so confusing

It was okay, although the title in my opinion is not suitable. Its more about Lola than Alpha Asher tho. The storyline was good, the storytelling even better. The author truly let us use our imagination with the way the story was written.

The story itself is pretty okay, i wouldnt say interesting. The FL is weak, ugh cant believe she got back with ML after the way he treated her.  it’s hard to really get into the writing because so many parts are missing. A lot of the sentences and paragraphs are cut off or incomplete, and every chapter seems to have big gaps. its frustrating !!  It’s clear the author put in a lot of work, so I really hope someone edits and fixes it up so readers can fully enjoy what the author intended.

The storytelling is so-so. Ive read too much low quality chinese novel to recognise their story telling and characters style. Not sure why so many people like this. The s*x scene is too much tbh. Not much characters development, there is some but not much. It was okay to pass the time