A Female Alpha’s Revenge

I'm currently on chapter 401 and I've decided to stop reading this book. I invite you to read and form your own opinion. The story itself was interesting, but something deeply bothered me. I don't like the writing in this story at all, and after much headache, I finally figured out what was bothering me. You know, when you read a story for toddlers, repetitive sentences that keep repeating the characters' names with short sentences and basic dialogue? Well, that's what's happening here. The "children's book" writing style, with adult language and endless descriptions, along with some bad telenovelas, ended up putting me off reading altogether. It's a shame, because the story was interesting. Maybe a good author will pick up the plot and write something decent.

This book is very well written and has phenomenal plot twists, it is unlike other books so far in the read (chapter 65 is where I am currently at) nice action filled and not a "lovey doey-over the top sweet" makes for an inquisitive read, no unneccessary drag outs of scenes, makes for a difficult-wait for the next chapter to be uploaded...great job author! Very well written so far.