List of reviews made by users for the Alpha Hayley's Destined Mate novel.
2 users have written reviews for the Alpha Hayley's Destined Mate novel and rated it with an average score of 1.2 out of 5.
2 Reviews
The story is slow. The lead is a Mary Sue. The writing is lazy. There is very little payoff to the tention that is built up. Plots are so twisted to the point of being cut that there are so many things happening while simultaneously nothing is happening.
Catching at first, but dragging the rest, Hayley has so many secret identities and talents that it gets hard to track. So many twists that I think the author probably already got lost