Alpha Loren

This is a long story but it is complete, and you can read it without a bunch of grammar errors. I really got irked by the character she is ungrateful like a bratty kid and when she should be disobedient and difficult she's submissive. 

Could have been great but just too many things happening to one person and not really keeping in line with other werewolf lure. Just a little bit too convoluted to be a really amazing story

It has a great storyline but becomes a bit too complicated with the Luna constantly hiding things from her mate even if she doesn’t know how he will react or asking for help otherwise it’s a good story