Rejected, but not Broken

C'était une bonne histoire, et le livre est complet. Le style d'écriture n'est pas exceptionnel, et je partage l'avis d'un autre lecteur : on dirait qu'il a été écrit par un adolescent. Il y a beaucoup de personnages, et il est difficile de tous les retenir. Malgré cela, j'ai apprécié l'histoire.  

I can't say the book is entirely bad—the core premise is quite interesting. However, I only managed to get through 18 chapters and don't plan to continue.

The main issue lies in the execution. The writing style feels like it was written by a teenager: the difficulties are overly exaggerated, while the training achievements feel miraculously easy and come too quickly. The constant, selfless help the protagonist receives from all sides is also irritating, as it lacks any real justification within the plot.

It's a shame that the potential of an interesting premise wasn't realized. All in all, I won't be reading any further.

Great storyline with lots of twists and turns. Great read. One thing though, there are a lot of characters to get to know. So that will require a bit of getting to know them type feeling.