She Outshines Them All (Athena and Matthew)

So far I find the story quite entertaining. I like the positiveness portrayed in the Donovan family. As of now, I have just met Alaric... So not all of the Donovan family has been introduced to me yet. I am looking forward to meeting them all, since they seem to be people with good characteristics. 

One downside of this novel are the typo errors. There are chapters with paragraphs or sentences that became gibberish because of the typo errors. I would usually skip pass them, but it does interrupt the good flow of reading the story, most especially when one have been totally immersed in it. 

I hope the dear author would have the time to proof read and correct the errors. I feel that will help boost the story to a higher ranking. 

Overall a highly entertaining read. Thank you for introducing Athena and her Donovan family to us. 

Wishing the author great success!

Well worth it to read. Didn't drag too much and stick to the point. Athena was amazing. Her and Mathew parts in the novel was very short and felt that they could've provided more interactions. Love how the Donavan family was poor but with Athena finding her way back to them, she slowly helped everyone find their potentials and provided the best opportunity for them to rise and be successful. She was also very forgiven to her twin sister. There is a surprising twist about UFO and higher dimensions which was very interesting. Overall, good novel with some minor grammar errors  

The best book ever read.simple and not complicated but the grammatical errors are annoying, there are also missing sentences and paragraphs.