What is up with all the misspelled words and grammatical errors???... There are times when the reader cannot understand a sentence or even a whole paragrah... It significantly hinders understanding of parts in the story and lessens the enjoyment of reading... Don't y'all have editors or proofreader to correct these things... Even, an AI program could help in my opinion!!!
Don't waste your time reading... the author bailed on the book and storyline... There is no closure to more than half of the story and no tying up ANY loose ends... The words "The End" leaves the reader lost and confused without any hint of a continuation!!!
First off, this book should be split into 2 or 3 books and have its story shaped a little better... There are way too many things left undone... this book seem to drag on and on with it's repetitive descriptions of events and people... Now, it ends with no real closure to more than 1/2 of the plots and twists it entailed... I thouroughly am disappointed in the writer for basically bailing on this book... It had so much potential... I might have to finish writing this book for myself so I might have some closure... I'll publish it when I get it finished... 1 out of 5 stars is the best score it deserves... NOT HAPPY!!!
Really good story, characters, plot and dynamics... only one loose end remains untold that I would like to read about --- What happened to Amber's mom after writing the letter to her and after Michaelson died in battle... other than that I give it 4.5 out 5 stars.
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Can't even read or understand 1/2 of this chapter due to grammatical and spelling errors... Seriously needs to be fixed!!!
What is up with all the misspelled words and grammatical errors???... There are times when the reader cannot understand a sentence or even a whole paragrah... It significantly hinders understanding of parts in the story and lessens the enjoyment of reading... Don't y'all have editors or proofreader to correct these things... Even, an AI program could help in my opinion!!!
Don't waste your time reading... the author bailed on the book and storyline... There is no closure to more than half of the story and no tying up ANY loose ends... The words "The End" leaves the reader lost and confused without any hint of a continuation!!!
First off, this book should be split into 2 or 3 books and have its story shaped a little better... There are way too many things left undone... this book seem to drag on and on with it's repetitive descriptions of events and people... Now, it ends with no real closure to more than 1/2 of the plots and twists it entailed... I thouroughly am disappointed in the writer for basically bailing on this book... It had so much potential... I might have to finish writing this book for myself so I might have some closure... I'll publish it when I get it finished... 1 out of 5 stars is the best score it deserves... NOT HAPPY!!!
Really good story, characters, plot and dynamics... only one loose end remains untold that I would like to read about --- What happened to Amber's mom after writing the letter to her and after Michaelson died in battle... other than that I give it 4.5 out 5 stars.