This book is written with the assistance of an AI Chatbot. It's repetative, lists off past events to remind the bot\reader. Scenes drag out with useless fillers. The extreme mood swings from sadness to possession is unrealistic.. But what bothers me the most is the main character Millie. Not only does she get away with fraud and various illegal activity, but she doesn't grow. Her character bounces from personality to personality like scrolling through videos and for a "Rich Heiress" She's dumb. After nearly being run down by a car, she should've armed herself. Then brings an orphan into this mess? Lost interest around 1080. Hard to stay connected  with a main character who is mentally weak. Sadly, I don't have enough space to list the things inconsistent with this story.