Great story line and characters so far. would've gave a higher rating except for the fact that there are many paragraphs that are just jumbled up word-salad. Hopefully there will be an update soon since it's already been over 2 months

were are the updates? And is there really no one who can actually fix the books here? I have read many books and they ALL have issues with having multiple paragraphs the don't even contain actual sentences just unknown writing that doesn't mean anything