If I had to pay for this story I'd be upset. There are too many characters to drive the story along. In some places, there's more sex than story, and in some places, more focus on the kids than driving the plotline. Other than that, the story is good, but it is not complete at Chapter 164.

While the book is complete on other platforms, it is missing 5 chapters here. The story is good, very few typos, and is well written. However, the book has one of the worst endings I've ever read and leaves too many unanswered questions. I tried to leave 3 stars, but the app wasn't cooperative.

The book is missing the first 9 chapters. Other than that, the story is engaging, well written, and has very few typos. Worth the read

Not complete and typos galore. Grammar mistakes aplenty. Overuse of words. Other than that, a decent story. Would have liked to have seen how it ended.