This started out so good but now for as little as we get to read of the story on each page, its disheartening.  No alpha command, no backbone and why do we have to have character outline and blah blah blah on each page. I Don't think I'm gonna keep reading. The idle commentary takes away from the story that I desperately want to keep liking and reading. Idle filler isn't continually needed and distracts immensely.  Sorry author