good story but too lengthy can we not have somany characters please. it would be nice if the story ended with a couple of villans but this is too long winding and to tell the truth iam not able to put it down but if it drags on I will loose interest

incomplete story!!! come on it was so interesting...the plot was good and I thought it was short and sweet but it's incomplete it's so frustrating

a very bold and mature love story. nice and short plot. straight as arrow. really liked reading the story..though the other stories could have been developed. would have been great