Enjoyed the storyline and characters, well written with minor typos. The writer kept it fairly succinct and actually provided an enjoyable read where I did not become bored and skip ahead. Must be part of the genre that there has to be some sex, will give the writer credit, kept to a minimum as the focus was on characters and storyline.

Interesting storyline, warning triggers-(child/sexual abuse with sadism), very succinct with good characters. Story flowed nicely, kept me fully engaged, didn’t skip (- if I get bored I start skipping to ahead) Great that the writer gave a good strong ending, didn’t make it into sappy ever after, loved the ending.

Storyline is great, kept me engaged throughout the entire book! Didn’t waste time on drawn out scenes with unnecessary drivel , and clearly the writer understands a great storyline with strong characters is critical for audiences. This is a keeper and one I can reread later.

WOW! WOW, wow, and wow! Fully enjoyed the story, while never big on sex scenes, but the storyline and characters were so strong, so I kept reading - were the sex scenes needed? I don’t believe so, but that’s me. So I did skip through those sections not many but a few. I did find a few spots more information would be nice but also not necessary. Overall loved the characters and the story.

Not complete - too bad good storyline and characters. Writer needs to change the status to incomplete. Many aren’t interested to read in progress and I am one

Really did enjoy the book, good story line and characters. A few sections could have been stronger and a few edited down, but overall a very good read.

Not bad decent storyline but I am disappointed the story ends on chapter 132 - it says Completed but it is not. Seems like a 1/2 way point.

Was decent but, whole sections missing, other times sentences. Unfortunately another incomplete novel listed as complete. Disappointed as the heroine laid out a strong future/ final conflict / resolution but now I won’t know.

Great storyline, more complex than others in this genre but overall well written. For the most part enjoyed the characters, at times found 2 male leads Rafe and Jack a bit weak. Sections could have been stronger, I had 3 sections where to were not as well written hence skipped ahead, but then had to back track as a key piece of information was in the weaker sections. While I am not big on sagas, for those liking them, the author does have the option to write and tie into this book. Satisfied readers overall and look forward to more from this author.

Strong storyline, the characters, plot are so captivating lol cannot wait for the rest of the book! Well written and looking for more by this author.