Parts of this story doesn't make sense and often feels incomplete.the characters aren't fully engaged with each other and when they finally connect they are quickly pulled apart?!? It's a real shame as it end to spoilling the flow of the story. The end is also incomplete.
I really don't understand this story!? It's nearly chapter 400 and this stupidity of Bradan asking for a divorce after sleeping with his wife. And the other one wasn't his mistress yet then right??! Because why would he divorce her to be with the other one?! It's not clear
Did you write that Victoria was paralysed from the waist down ? How can she starts walking?!? Shame this story is full of empty lines. Hope people don't read this story it's not worth it!!
This story is full of rubbish!! It goes around in circles had a good start but the constant core of this story that never quite seems to be clear it's draining it kills it! Pity had a good plot but it's becoming boring
Why is she allowing herself to be guided by him all the time!! When is she going to grow a spine. Always in limbo so much overthinking it's frustrating. And I don't think he's good for her?!? Needs a change mate or not?!
The story started really well but these last chapters were Becxa gets involved with Neal and keep pushing James away like a bad thing!! Really is annoying it just spoiled the whole thing!! They neede to work their relationship and not have Neal always there around to make sure it wouldn't happened!! Because really those two brother and sister interfered a lot with James and Becca!! I'm loosing interest
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Parts of this story doesn't make sense and often feels incomplete.the characters aren't fully engaged with each other and when they finally connect they are quickly pulled apart?!? It's a real shame as it end to spoilling the flow of the story. The end is also incomplete.
I really don't understand this story!? It's nearly chapter 400 and this stupidity of Bradan asking for a divorce after sleeping with his wife. And the other one wasn't his mistress yet then right??! Because why would he divorce her to be with the other one?! It's not clear
Did you write that Victoria was paralysed from the waist down ? How can she starts walking?!? Shame this story is full of empty lines. Hope people don't read this story it's not worth it!!
This story is full of rubbish!! It goes around in circles had a good start but the constant core of this story that never quite seems to be clear it's draining it kills it! Pity had a good plot but it's becoming boring
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Why is she allowing herself to be guided by him all the time!! When is she going to grow a spine. Always in limbo so much overthinking it's frustrating. And I don't think he's good for her?!? Needs a change mate or not?!
The story started really well but these last chapters were Becxa gets involved with Neal and keep pushing James away like a bad thing!! Really is annoying it just spoiled the whole thing!! They neede to work their relationship and not have Neal always there around to make sure it wouldn't happened!! Because really those two brother and sister interfered a lot with James and Becca!! I'm loosing interest