The writing could be better but the story is nice.

It's the same phrases over and over again that can ruin the reading. Obviously you wanna know the ending.

I think it's terribile. The dialogue are awful. Even if the firsts chapters were intriguing, the rest of the novel isn't worthing of wasting my time.

Most of the time Is difficult to know who Is speaking. And overall boring

One of the best stories ever found here. Well written, captivating, erotic, romantic and even funny... I truly wished to be Haven or find my Wesley!!