Can the writer PLEASE decide whether it is noon, or late at night after dinner?! Is Adonis at the creche or in her arms?! This is as horrible as if AI had written this!
Was this written by a h*rny teenager? The storyline progresses too fast, no descriptive words beyond 'beautiful', 'handsome' and 'hot'. And the vocabulary is basic at best and atrocious at worst. Gets confused with names and Autocorrect is an unknown entity. I expect this quality from AI, not humans.
Best book I've ever read on this site! The plot twists are great, the fighting scenes could use some filling out but I LOVED the strong female lead who can still want a mate and pups while being an excellent fighter! 5 stars!!!
Beauty and the Beast meets 50 shades of grey: Stockholm syndrome and BDSM. The book's only redeeming quality is the short stories of the siblings at the end.😑
If only this story was edited first. It has everything a fantasy romance requires: a love triangle, intrigue and some spectacular plot twists. The "everybody is only happy if they are married" ending is a bit cliche but at least it has a happy ending, unlike some I've read on here. It should end on chapter 132 though.
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The Chapters on The Council of Alpha's are fragmented. Some are duplicates and others are not wven written in! Very frustrating!
Can the writer PLEASE decide whether it is noon, or late at night after dinner?! Is Adonis at the creche or in her arms?! This is as horrible as if AI had written this!
Was this written by a h*rny teenager? The storyline progresses too fast, no descriptive words beyond 'beautiful', 'handsome' and 'hot'. And the vocabulary is basic at best and atrocious at worst. Gets confused with names and Autocorrect is an unknown entity. I expect this quality from AI, not humans.
Best book I've ever read on this site! The plot twists are great, the fighting scenes could use some filling out but I LOVED the strong female lead who can still want a mate and pups while being an excellent fighter! 5 stars!!!
Beauty and the Beast meets 50 shades of grey: Stockholm syndrome and BDSM. The book's only redeeming quality is the short stories of the siblings at the end.😑
If only this story was edited first. It has everything a fantasy romance requires: a love triangle, intrigue and some spectacular plot twists. The "everybody is only happy if they are married" ending is a bit cliche but at least it has a happy ending, unlike some I've read on here. It should end on chapter 132 though.