Most of it is unreadable. Words are out of place or misspelled. I wish I could continue to read it, but It takes too much brain energy to understand it.

I have to keep reading just to see how this ends. I like that the overall storyline is different than most but they are not my favorite characters. These are some of the dumbest people I’ve ever come across in one of these novels. There are too many redundancies, almost like there is a word limit that needed to be met.

I couldn't finish this. 

Interesting storyline. I don’t like that the MMC is a cheater. He claims so much love for Sylvia but is intimate with multiple women.

Still unsure about this one. Is there a word count requirement for these books? This one has a lot of redundancy.

Example: they were always connected, and the two heads were well-matched. They were of

appropriate ages and were a perfect match. They were well-suited candidates for each other.

Can you please tell me again how good of a match they are?

Somehow Gareth turned into Edgar… ??????

People are constantly “rendered speechless”.

Love this story!! If you pick any one from all the stories, pick this one! Of all the ones I’ve read so far (quite a few), this is the best!!

The translation on this is terrible. It hurts my brain trying to understand what is going on. The story line itself is fine but a lot doesn’t make sense due to poor translation.

The story itself is great. It was difficult to read most of the time because the sentences were all mixed up or words misspelled. Does anyone proofread these novels?

I am only on chapter 30 and I am not pleased with this novel. The main female character, Myra, is a weak, love sick pushover. I prefer the women to be kick ass, strong types. Maybe it will get better?

Highly recommend this novel. I love the story line. Arielle is a badass, strong woman. I’m curious. Are most rich people stupid? And why do they let people get away with slapping them and not seeking revenge. “I’ll let you go this time because no one was hurt” is bullshit. I’d never let them go.

I liked this story. Some of it was repetitive but at least it wasn’t thousands of characters of the same things. Some chapters had sentences all mixed up and words all over so you had to figure out where some of the words fit in.