I chased down this story and thoroughly enjoyed it! They were cute together, with just enough laughter, crazy intrigue and drama for a well balanced story. Only problem is that there is an epilouge, a 37th chapter, available on the apps that is not present here so this ending seems abrupt. I hope it gets added soon.

This has obvious foreign overtones that don't translate well for me and too many jumbled errors. Also, without a fantasy element the MFC is too over the top with an impossible skillset,  history, age & timeline.  The offspring were following the same path and it all became obsurd. Looking forward,  found that while only 300+ chapters are here, there are actually over a thousand! I had to cut my losses and delete it from my library. Maybe it's meant for much younger minds.

I very much like the bones of the story. There were some things that made it a challenging read: the frequency and repetitivenes of many details and phrasing,  the odd pop-up/change  to use of Asian names for characters, and the unnecessary filler that made things drag on, to name a few. However, the characters and plot were wonderful. I enjoyed Catherine and Branden; Audrey's arc was a bonus. I do wish we were given an epilog. 

Very short. That is the best thing to be said. If you're curious it won't take much time. Chestnt's other story is the complete opposite; it's long but good. They share an author and a ton of errors.