Reviews
I am enjoying it. It's not very spicy, but the story is engaging. It has less werewolf lore than other books. There are some parts that don't make sense and aren't addressed, and some characters that simply disappear, which is confusing, but a relatively good read, nonetheless
I liked this one. It was action packed, unexpected twists and it ended smoothly. I liked the characters and even laughed at times. It was enjoyable.
While the story is pretty good, the confusion with gender and pronouns is distracting. The author keeps misusing masculine and feminine descriptors. Also, the POV isn't always indicated, so you're left confused.
Love this book. It's well written and fun to read. I love the relationships that Alpha Logan has with everyone, and how the stories intertwine.
I really enjoyed this book. It flowed well I liked the characters and the story kept me interested. Looking forward to the next book of the series.
Was really into this, and it just ended, mid story, BEFORE the ultimate climax. It says it's ongoing, but no updates for 4 months.
My one critique is that it jumps from first person to third person a lot, and some of the names get muddled in the beginning (Daniel and David etc...,)
I enjoyed this one, a lot. The story was well written, the characters were though-out and well defined and it flowed well. I could have kept reading, but I also like that there was a definitive ending.
Great story. Very well written and lots of action. So many things happening! It's exciting. I can't wait to continue reading so I can find out what happens next.
The bones of the story are there, it's just that there is a lot of switching between first person and third person within the same paragraph or chapter. Also, there is a lot of name mix-ups - sometimes Eden instead of Eros, sometimes Olivia instead of Eva, once it was Ryan instead of Arthur! Like, who is Ryan?!? Anyway, the editing leaves a lot to be desired. More info on the dream world would help.
Clearly a young writer, so I look forward to seeing them grow and hone their craft.
Good, but there wasn't was much Baily & Asher as I wanted. Plus the last two chapters were from a different book. However, I liked this story. I also liked the way it ended.