I had to stop reading since the story changes to a different version after chapter 29. If it’s fixed, I might consider picking it back up and reading it again.

It's the typical rebirth story with a Mary Sue FL who excels at everything they do. The rest of the charecters are there. The j*rk ex-husband and scheming adopted/stepsister, the neglectful and eventual regretful family members, and the hot brooding billionaire love interest. It's predictable but entertaining enough. At this point I'm going to assume that its been dropped. Its a good thing there are a bunch of stories just like it, so no fomo.

Why are the stories that I find halfway decent getting dropped? I don’t mind if it’s shorter. I would rather read a decent short story than a terrible long story. 0 stars for being incomplete.

I’ve only read up to chapter 56, but Cameron’s and Greta’s actions are repetitive and annoying. Greta and Cameron are your typical antagonists, entitled and lacks any sense of awareness. The writing is lazy. Plots are only put in place to move the story along but are then dropped when it no longer serves its purpose, or it’s completely changed like the author forgot what was written or thinks the readers are too stupid to remember. With how many chapters there are already I feel this story Is needlessly long, and with the annoying lazy writing, I doubt I will be able to last much longer.

The story is slow. The lead is a Mary Sue. The writing is lazy. There is very little payoff to the tention that is built up. Plots are so twisted to the point of being cut that there are so many things happening while simultaneously nothing is happening.